Characters: Peter Parker + cast of dozens
Rating: Teen(strong language)
Word count: 7900
Summary: Written for
Prompt: Jonah Jameson asks Peter to get some shots for a story on the "mutant problem."
Story Summary: A week after Black Tuesday's telepathic attack on the world, Peter Parker took some pictures for a story on "the mutant problem." Ten years later, he's still taking pictures. The only difference is his definition of "the problem."
a photographic editorial by Peter Parker
ETA: Hello everyone! Thanks so much for reading and reccing this project. By some freak of nature it landed on Tor's "Of Interest" panel so, in the hopes of keeping NYT's very rich lawyers from coming down on my flat little heinie, I'll be adjusting some of the non-X-Men pictures. So if things look different or suddenly disappear in mid-read, that's just me doing some updating. Thanks again!
ETA, Jr.: Adjustments made, not that it's really noticeable unless you look for it. Paranoia assuaged.
ETA-3: Edits United: In response to the overwhelming number of visitors (HI EVERYONE! ZOMG! HI! HI!), I've edit a few embarrassing typos & inconsistencies. Peter Parker is now BSc Biochemistry, PhD Genetics. The Mutant Registration Bill received a second reading. Hank McCoy verbally spars with Stephen Hawking
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August 4 2009, 07:34:56 UTC 2 years ago
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August 4 2009, 09:07:42 UTC 2 years ago
So uh, awesome. Fantastic job and it must have taken hours and thanks for sharing.
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August 4 2009, 12:05:40 UTC 2 years ago
OMG, you finished it! I'm so glad that your computer is working again, because it would hav been a travesty not to share this with the world.
This is amazing. Seriously, amazing! I am only part way through it, but I had to stop and come and tell you how brilliant it is! BRAVO!
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August 4 2009, 18:23:21 UTC 2 years ago
Thanks ever so for giving it a read!
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August 4 2009, 15:31:37 UTC 2 years ago
wooooohooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
General: gold, this is gold. I enjoyed it so much that I stopped writing my initial comment and took my time for a review-while-reading thing.My usual: your writing, bla,bla, bla...I don’t want to be repetitive. You know what I already like about your fics.
Specifics:
The layout, added comments and links ...the whole package...for whatever amount of time and effort you put in this, my proporcionate THANKS and CONGRATULATIONS.
Casting: great. All pictures are perfect choices. I specialy liked Kurt’s manip in the cloister, very fitting.
The idea seemed lovely to me. It’s original, and you kept yourself true to the concept: succint writing expected for the (newspaper) framework you chose, and also with a wide range of writing possibilities using all those characters. It seems to me that character development (in just a few lines) is one of your fortes.
Texts:
Pete: I L-O-V-E-D it. If I were to choose something, it’d be the last paragraph. It wraps up the text beautifully and it invites the reader to think beyond the written lines.
As for the characters I know/I’ve read/seen in the movies, my faves: Kurt (I just...loved it), Pietro/Wanda (nice contrast), Hank (priceless), Charles (I read him like three times, very appropriate), Emma (Don't those investors want a return for their money? Emma smirked. "No." need I say more? this one was great.), Rogue/Bobby (better than I expected before reading, don’t ask me why, I don’t know. The manip on Rogue’s hair is great), Pete’s take on Scott; Alex and Ororo.
"Most popular": little things improving the whole. They made me want to find an expanded article behind each of them. Each. Of. Them.
THIS WAS GREAT AND AWESOME AND GREAT AND AWESOME....AND GREAT AND AWESOME.
thanks. :)
August 4 2009, 18:27:25 UTC 2 years ago
Re: wooooohooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't take completely credit for the idea;Thank you as always for your very detailed reviews. Like I've said before, it helps me figure out what works and what doesn't, and it's very satisfying to read especially when you've work long and hard. So THANK YOU greatly.
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<3 I can't even begin to love this enough! Just the level of detail and character insight and thought you put into this! <3<3<3
Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant!
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August 4 2009, 16:31:34 UTC 2 years ago
I can't even. I am so happy you did this, thank you so much for doing this. Really, really, really awesome and well done.
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August 4 2009, 16:34:11 UTC 2 years ago
And, nope, I didn't miss my little Jodelle there. ;)
I could go on for hours about how badass this is, but it condenses down to just one word: brilliant.
August 4 2009, 18:34:54 UTC 2 years ago
And using Jodelle Ferland was SO unintentional. I did a search for likely characters and her face appealed to me because she has such big, expressive eyes (that I would manip off -_^). The longer I looked, the more familiar she became and then I went, "HA! IT'S KALA!"
So OF COURSE I had to cast her.
August 4 2009, 21:34:16 UTC 2 years ago
Some of my favorites would be Pete, as utterly calm as ever , fighting back in his own way. Emma Frost - no explanation needed. Warren complaining about washing his wings. Ororo! Scott! (I really like how bright his glasses are against the rest of the photo.) Peter geeking out about Hank. Because. it's. Hank!
Pure win on a golden platter. With fudge and a side of awesome.
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